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 I met her by the vending machines.
We spoke in breaths…and that’s it.

It was the most beautiful thing I’ve ever seen.
Naked speech, we had nothing to hide.
We painted our names red in the skyline.
And nights we kissed the stars and waved goodbye.

I could have stay there until I died.
Until my heart became coffin nails.
Only she could have made me live like this,
Off of crappy food and TV static.

We made the moon bow down to us.
And the stars worship us.
Could have survived in space
From the air exhaled by the two us

Can’t go on like this.
With this ardent love.
This place returns my sense
For while.

Ever loved something so much it hurt your stomach?  
She had me so high; thought I found Jesus.
She rode off in that bus; never saw her again.
Close the book, even fairy-tales ends.
 
I don’t know why I sank this ghost ship
I guess some secrets you just keep on your lips.
Other you use to touch the stars
Like diamonds you’ve dreamt of from afar.

I remember you well
From that hotel.
I closed my eyes
And you said,

Can’t go on like this.
With this ardent love.
This place returns my sense
For while.
For a while
For a while
For a while

Can’t go on like this.
With this ardent love.
This place returns my sense
For while.

Can’t go on like this.
With this ardent love.
This place returns my sense
For while.
A song about heartbreak, we've all been there, Let the melodies sooth your pain.

Based on true events, though I changed details. For one, it was a park not a hotel..but hotels are so much cooler.

Listen to it here: youtu.be/8Q0ezoJyfdY
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TheSisters2 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014  New member Student General Artist
Hey, I just listened to this on YouTube, and it's wonderful. Better than many songs today.-Chrissy
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xxdraxx Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Student Artist
Thanks :D
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JustDirt Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  New member
My dad always tells me to go by the meaning of the song, not the beat. Of course, I agree with people who say that you ran out of breath during the rap, but to be more fair, I'd like to say the lyrics were worded beautifully. I can't be descriptive to save a life, but those lyrics are just amazing, to say the least. I can't wait to see more.
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xxdraxx Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Student Artist
Thanks :)
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kisalovesllamaz Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice :3 could use a bit of work but really good
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xxdraxx Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014  Student Artist
Thank you :)
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someonesecho Featured By Owner May 27, 2014
I agree with diana8651
it's quite alright, but the timing feels a lil' off and you often sound out of breath with the rap and such. I say that you should learn to find your own pace that you're comfortable with and work from there. But I don't know, it's just my opinion, so yeah
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xxdraxx Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Student Artist
Thanks for listening and giving feedback :)
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Diana8651 Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful! I listened to the song, a very nice melody, and the lyrics are pretty good too. However, one thing that I noticed when listening is that your voice doesn't quite... oh, what's the word... match with the tempo. Timing is everything. It was just a touch off. Other than that, it was fantastic!
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xxdraxx Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Student Artist
Thanks for the feedback!

Glad you liked it! :D
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