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July 4, 2014
Ghost Ship by xxdraxx is "deep, simplistic, and beautifully worded, this short poem is well-crafted and leaves the reader with a nostalgic sadness." (Suggesters Words)
Featured by HugQueen
Suggested by littleblueraccoon
Literature Text
You still ghost ship
Through
My Subconscious.
I've been waiting
For you
To drop anchor.
Through
My Subconscious.
I've been waiting
For you
To drop anchor.
Literature
Tell me you see me
Tell me you see me...
Not the boy smiling
in the reflection of your eyes,
the green pool which
he had so readily dived into.
No, not that pathetic imitation
of joyful emotion
but rather
the authentic personification
of sorrow
lying at that boy's feet.
Can't you see me?
I imagine I must be there
though within the pool
of your eyes
I can only find
that deceiving mask of an individual,
without depth
without feeling
without strife
without emotion
aside
from that disgusting imitation of joy.
Come you must see!
I am here!
Not the boy you see standing
but instead the boy
holding the floor
for it
it offers me the comfort of closeness,
the boy s
Literature
You Know What You Are!
The storyteller is lost in us
Don't ask me where he went
I see his traces in the words you write
But his power is truly spent
And all I see now is meaningless
Words made simply for the thrill
Belted out by a literary killer
Monster, looking for a fill
Literature
twenty
we kill
the angels
and then ask
why the world
is full of monsters
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EDIT: Whoa, whoa, whoa. This became a DD? Awesome Thanks to littleblueraccoon for suggesting it and IrrevocableFate for actually featuring it. It means a lot to me; it was a pleasant surprise waking up to this!
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EDIT: Whoa, whoa, whoa. This became a DD? Awesome Thanks to littleblueraccoon for suggesting it and IrrevocableFate for actually featuring it. It means a lot to me; it was a pleasant surprise waking up to this!
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Links:
Facebook: www.facebook.com/DylanSetoArti…
Bandcamp: dylanseto.bandcamp.com/
SoundCloud: soundcloud.com/dylanseto
Deviantart: xxdraxx.deviantart.com/
Youtube: www.youtube.com/channel/UCuQA8…
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Short but excellent, very poignant. I can certainly relate! I love this poem.