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I had a dream.
Then I smashed it.
I kicked it,
I punched it.
I pulled it to the ground until it couldn't make a sound.
I heard it scream for help. I made it shut up.
I made it tremble.
I spit in its face.
I wrapped it in dirt and left it to die.
I stabbed it until it was unrecognizable.
I was about to kill it
Then I realized it was me.
Up to interpretation. Don't ask me about it. I probably won't give a straight answer or answer at all.

I don't want to talk about it to be honest.
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Martin Luther King, Jr. had a dream; then again, everybody else has one in mind as well. But when I step into yours I see a darker side of you... you know, a Stephen King-like side. I see quite a bit of pain and conviction in this work of art, you know what I mean?

I suppose what I'm really trying to say is, this is one of those things that take me back to my most haunting memories as an adolescent when all I could think about is all those bullies who relentlessly picked on me in middle school; however, this simultaneously gruesome lyric also has some beauty to it! I really like this... I mean, how do you judge something that happens in middle schools across the country every day during the school year? I'm telling ya, if there's anyone that can combine dreams with cold reality, it's you. Keep up the great work.
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HollyRoseFowlCasson Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I tend to do this. Suffocate my desires and crush them because I don't believe that that's what I'm supposed to do, I don't believe that it's what I can do. And then I realize that I should have given myself a chance. 
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xxdraxx Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Student Artist
If I remember...I wrote this because I was jealous of someone. lol
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Emeico Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Reading this scared me.  But its a good scare O_o 
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xxdraxx Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Student Artist
sowwy :3
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Emeico Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
its okay lol xD
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xxdraxx Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Student Artist
BOO!
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Emeico Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
O_O ...nevermind lol
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xxdraxx Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Student Artist
I'm a scary person yo.
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Emeico Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD!
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xxdraxx Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Student Artist
teehee
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